Flamboyant or Staid Example of a Marketing Job Cover Letter?

This is an example of a 'Marketing' cover letter to anOver the last five years I have:
employer who has advertised the job of Marketing- Created a modern and European marketing plan for
Manager. Note how this covering letter is not theone of the UK's leading ballet companies, leading to a
standard "I wish to apply..." letter.profitable tour of N America.
It's true that some jobs demand a more flamboyant- Held budgetary responsibility for £350,000
approach than others and every cover letter needs to- Acted as Marketing Manager for one of London's
be interesting; however 'Marketing' by its nature can bebest known theatre groups, where I won sponsorship
illustrated most effectively when you adopt afrom Midshire Bank Scottish Airways, National Railtech,
'marketing' style for your job application cover.Power Generators plc and many smaller companies.
As a marketing cover letter it should pique the reader's- Also worked for a year as a self-employed
sense of interest, illustrate the way the applicantconsultant in Germany devising marketing strategies
understands the advertiser's need and create thefor Government funded cultural activities.
desire to find out more. How do they find out more?I am confident that I have established my ability to
By inviting you to an interview of course.succeed in a tough and financially pressured
"Dear Mr. Pleasantenvironment.
MARKETING MANAGER - DAILY PLANET 8THSince I would anticipate that sponsorship will continue
JANUARY 2007to be essential to the success of any arts
Being a keen and regular theatre and concert-goer, Irelatedactivity I am sure my track record of developing
have often visited Brindleton City Arts &and maintaining business contacts shouldserve us well.
Conference Centre and was therefore mostMy extensive network will be a useful starting point for
interested and excited by your advertisement for aBrindleton. I also believe that a positive
Marketing Manager. I should like to throw my hat intoEuropean outlook will be essential and my experiences
the ring by enclosing my CV for your attention.of working overseas, together with goodspoken
The advertisement conveys a great sense of energyFrench and German, would allow me to market your
and pride in your organisation - this is exactlythe typeconference facilities sensitively andefficiently.
of environment to which I have contributed in the past.I look forward to the opportunity of discussing my
As requested, I have set out below a list ofcontribution with you further.
achievements but would emphasise that some ofYours sincerely
thesewould not have been possible but for the strongJeremy McStone"
team spirit which has been a feature in most ofNot too flamboyant for a marketing job cover letter,
myroles. I have always encouraged corporate effortbut one that is more imaginative than the usual
and prefer to think of myself as a member ofapplication cover letter.
theorchestra rather than a one man band!